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Friday 23 February 2018

An example of a recount **



Last year we went to Australia . We went on a big plane called Emirates It was the A380.

It was so fast I got some chocolate and a dich that had chiken and carrots in it, also I had

some cake . It was so yum.
When we landed our aunty was waiting in the airport with our cozen. We went in her car

and drove to her house . We were so tired.

When we were at her  house we unpacked our stuff. Our aunty gave us sum yum chips.
We turned on the tv and watched a cartoon called Mordecai and Rigby. Then at night we
went to watch Liverpool , they one 5-0 . My dad sat in the black box. It cost 100 dollars
more expensive in the black box you get a better view of the manger and the players .

 After the match we went to the mall and got a fidget spinner. Then we went home had
dinner and went to bed. We woke up and had some nutrigrain. Then we went to my
cozens karate he was good. After my cozen’s karate we went to have some lunch .
After that we went to toys r us. We got to spend 10 dollars each .

It was so much fun . We stayed there for 2 weeks . When we had to leave I was so sad .
When we got to the airport we seen our mum and Zion they were happy to see us.
I really want to go back to Australia because it was so much fun . THE END

100 word challange



100 Word Challenge Week 3
Latest prompt
This week I’m hoping you have some help with using verbs and adverbs!
It is:
…we were moving very fast when …
Things to consider:
  • Where were you going?
  • Does speed make a difference?
  • What would changing the speed do?
The form will close at 23.45 UK time on 17th February
Don't forget to enter your writing into the worldwide competition.  

 I am 26 years old I am boarding a plane . I am nerves . I have never been on a plane before. My plane was called out . I stepped in the plane . I said ‘this is it’ . I sat in my chair . The pilot said ‘clear for take off’ . The planes engine started . 20 minutes Into the flight , we were moving very fast when a bird flew in the engine .The plane was going down and down and down BOOM .The plane crashed in the sea . The sea was on fire. I sunk in the sea a shark bit my leg.