WALT Use basic punctuation correctly
I am just 57 years old . I came from space . I landed on the arctic circle . I made a house out of my rocket ship . A tree was there . It had a black skinny circle on it . I spun it and an apple grows. I was surprised a apple grew.
A box appeared I decided to touch it. A hole bunch of apples grew .I took a bite of one apple . The box was going to share it with my neighbour. I didn’t want to share. I ran for the box . I got the box .It went through me. I took a step . My leg turned into a box . I took another step my other leg turned into a box . This time he tried to jump. My whole body turned into a box . I was lonely I have no body . I was getting sick off singing. I just sat there.
