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Thursday, 3 May 2018

The Day I Hiked a Mountain

One morning I was hiking on top of a mountain. I had to walk for four days. When I was at the top I tripped over a carved stone. I removed all the crisp snow on it and it said Betty Leverd, born in 1920 died in 1996 . I was so surprised that there was a gravestone . I set up my tent, I grabbed all my supplies. The grave  was covered in CRIMSON blood I thought that was a little creepy .There where millions of gravestones . I shouted help I was scared.  I  FRANTICALLY ran down the steep, misty mountain.

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  1. Anonymous3 May 2018 at 10:17

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    1. Anonymous3 May 2018 at 10:19

      i know i just want you to have a good day chur chur chur chur

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      i know i just want you to have a good day chur chur chur chur

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  4. Tina Schmidt7 May 2018 at 02:45

    Dear Draved,
    Thank you for taking part in this week's 100 Word Challenge. You've written an interesting little story to go along with the 5 words for this week's prompt. You did a good job of building suspense in your story and making it a bit frightful. I like some of the strong vocabulary words you added in like steep misty mountain, crisp snow, and carved stone. Using strong words like that helps the reader really feel like they are there, watching the scene unfold in front of them. Maybe you can continue this story in another 100 Word Challenge writing piece. Keep on writing!
    Mrs. Schmidt (Team 100WC)
    Grade 3 Teacher
    Pennsylvania, USA

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  5. Draved30 August 2018 at 11:07

    i love righting

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