I am a student at Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 16 October 2017
The man who jumped in a swamp
2017, 16 September, Monday, Spring in Pakistan . A man dived into a swamp thinking It was deep but it was shallow .He banged his head on a rock. His child rang the ambulance .They asked how old is he? The child said “He is 28.” He was in a green swamp . He jumped in because he was burnt by a fire while toasting his marshmallow. He went hospital, his heart stopped pumping blood ,his heart stopped pumping . He passed away, the child is now in New Zealand with his mum. The boy is 8 years old,his father was a fisherman.
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