Hi my name is Draved I'm a firefighter. I was one day watching 1 news live at 6pm. They said there is a fire in Cavers Island on Neptune . I flew to Neptune on my spaceship with my firefighter truck inside . When I had landed I got in my red crimson truck and opened the spaceship doors and off I went in my truck to fight the fire . The fire burned down heaps of trees and caves . I grabbed my hose and wet the land . After I put the fire out I found heaps of dead birds called the sand birds. I walked back to my spaceship . The doors wouldn't open. I had to set camp for the night . I could hear birds crying,flying and more . I fell asleep . I woke up I'm my bed at home in New Zealand I scream ahhhh!!!!.
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Friday, 3 May 2019
Neptune under attack
This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us first we had a class brain storm of what the picture was about then we bran stormed some adjectives. finally we started our writing .
Hi my name is Draved I'm a firefighter. I was one day watching 1 news live at 6pm. They said there is a fire in Cavers Island on Neptune . I flew to Neptune on my spaceship with my firefighter truck inside . When I had landed I got in my red crimson truck and opened the spaceship doors and off I went in my truck to fight the fire . The fire burned down heaps of trees and caves . I grabbed my hose and wet the land . After I put the fire out I found heaps of dead birds called the sand birds. I walked back to my spaceship . The doors wouldn't open. I had to set camp for the night . I could hear birds crying,flying and more . I fell asleep . I woke up I'm my bed at home in New Zealand I scream ahhhh!!!!.
Hi my name is Draved I'm a firefighter. I was one day watching 1 news live at 6pm. They said there is a fire in Cavers Island on Neptune . I flew to Neptune on my spaceship with my firefighter truck inside . When I had landed I got in my red crimson truck and opened the spaceship doors and off I went in my truck to fight the fire . The fire burned down heaps of trees and caves . I grabbed my hose and wet the land . After I put the fire out I found heaps of dead birds called the sand birds. I walked back to my spaceship . The doors wouldn't open. I had to set camp for the night . I could hear birds crying,flying and more . I fell asleep . I woke up I'm my bed at home in New Zealand I scream ahhhh!!!!.
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