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Wednesday 6 November 2019

Te pakiwaitara mō paikea


 Naia ahau ko paikea e mihi atu ki a koutou

He moana pukepuke ka taea te ekengi

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora!

    My Name is Madison I am a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I think that this post is extremely creative and definitely something new. I have noticed these types of blogs everywhere around your class. I really like how you have made it super eye catching to others.

    Even though you have done an awesome job creating this blog to a high standard I still think that you can do something to improve. First I think that you should try to add in some more writing on how you made this and why. I think it would also be good to examine some of the challenges that you had accomplish. I think that another good thing to do would be to try to translate some of the Te Reo words.

    This reminds me of another classmate of yours that I have seen doing something like this but the waves and whale were different.

    How long did it take to make?

    Kind Regards,
    -Maddison

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